Monday, January 10, 2011

Poetry Bus : L'esprit d'escalier



Target

in memoriam C.T.G.

If words came as bidden
opened avenues
brushed ego aside
began flinging stuff through

conceits, longheld prejudice
bottles of piss
re-heated revenge
served up with a kiss

self-righteous tirades
unilateral, shrill
a teacup of toxins
from bitter old pills

vomitted eloquence
sparked by a slight
accusation from someone
or something not right

drummed down fusillades
released inner kids
broke down your guard
called out my id

Sent crusaders, stormtroopers
brickbats and bile
with the wink of an eye
and a twinkling smile

Could petulant spatting
still do me some good?
Re-write the outcome?
You betcha. It could.

10 comments:

Emerging Writer said...

Welcome board my fairly bitter bus. Glad you've got that off your chest now. Some super vocab there. May have to steal some

Padhraig Nolan said...

Cheers. More escalier than esprit right now, I'm afraid. Hopefully the year will improve as it goes on.

120 Socks said...

Pretty Cool Padhraig!

Padhraig Nolan said...

Thanks Socksy!

Dick said...

Too right! Well done, Padhraig.

Padhraig Nolan said...

Thanks Dick.

Niamh B said...

wow, a fierce tirade there, and very nicely sustained!

Padhraig Nolan said...

Thanks, O'Cushions.

Totalfeckineejit said...

Mighty, nasty, nice-I likes!

Padhraig Nolan said...

Thanks Peadar - been a while.